Mr.D and Miss.X

Mr.D and Miss.X
Couldnt find anything more apt than this pic as This is what my idea of perfect love as one needs to travel along without changing their lives. This is what all their suffering is about.

Thursday, September 9, 2010

You feel for me


CURTAIN RAISED:

Its a cold winter noon
Snow flakes are falling like millions of white feathers from the sky
she is sitting on the edge of the lab table with face completely hidden in her arms.
he walks in from the corridor and could hear nothing but her soft sobs as there is no one in that whole building.

he  -"Its pretty cold out there baby!" ( she is still crying)
he  -"Are you ok?" (reaches her. hugs from back and gives a kiss on her head)

she -"Im sor-r-r.." (clears her voice and says again)
she -"Im really sorry for yestday. I aint mean to hurt you"

he  -"I am not that hurt and its ok. forget it"
she -"No, Iam a bad girl. look around every1"
he  -"oh come on!!!"
she -"why I cant be like every1 else? I feel i dont deserve you someti..m...sss"(sobs even harder)


(he walk towards her. Takes her arm into his. Sit in-front of her, looking straight into her gloomy eyes and says-

" Baby,

going to flop films
presenting pretty gifts
being in phone for hours
publicizing love evry time
having a deep kiss

dating now and then
abandon close friends
turning against parents
dying for one another
and finally getting married

this is NOT ALL LOVE

love is that... that...

love is that what  YOU TRULY FEEL FOR ME................AT THIS MOMENT

This is called true love baby!!!
Never worry about rest of the things"
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-and hugs hard enough to stop her crying and die that moment in his arms.)









CURTAIN FALLS...
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6 comments:

  1. venkiSeptember 9, 2010 at 2:03 PM

    True love, let the hearts fly but one day they kisses as destiny designs...

    (14) + (43) = (143)

    I felt reality in each and every word that resembles real pain of heart...

    You are a Good heart reader...
    :-))

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 9, 2010 at 2:06 PM

    What to comment on this ?? They both love each other.. .. Try one side love ..

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  3. sree rekhaSeptember 10, 2010 at 8:05 AM

    true feelings expressed in heart touching lines..

    well said dude..
    keep rocking..

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  4. UnknownSeptember 14, 2010 at 10:02 PM

    Interesting post. Good luck.. start writing more as a serial.. continuous and lets see where you will get?

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  5. Ritz..October 5, 2010 at 12:14 AM

    -and hugs hard enough to stop her crying and die that moment in his arms.)

    Y die??
    Was interesting..

    Ritz..
    www.delectableflavors.blogspot.com

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  6. Sarah malikDecember 28, 2010 at 8:19 AM

    aww...that was heart rendering :)
    u should continue it maybe with lil twists but keep those emotions true as they are..sounds good!

    sarah

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